AO3 - Grade - Callum parts of this assignment are excellent and you clearly take great interest in the subject. However, there are elements of plagiarism. Tip: research first, quote, then reference, then give your understanding. If you can do this then the assignment is worthy of Distinction criteria.
I think thjat Unit 1 could easily be better because my AO1 I need to do again and my AO6 needs to be finshed in better detail and AO5 its too short and needs more detail.
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ReplyDeleteCallum parts of this assignment are excellent and you clearly take great interest in the subject.
However, there are elements of plagiarism.
Tip: research first, quote, then reference, then give your understanding.
If you can do this then the assignment is worthy of Distinction criteria.
Callum you need to upload AO6 as a whole document through your scribd account.
ReplyDeleteAO5
ReplyDeletewww: good structure and research
ebi: reference next time
I think thjat Unit 1 could easily be better because my AO1 I need to do again and my AO6 needs to be finshed in better detail and AO5 its too short and needs more detail.
ReplyDeleteAO1
ReplyDeleteWWW: Interesting, didn't feel like a task to read it.
EBI:More paragraphing, less bullet points.